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breathe softly for memy dreams of you are saturated,
as briefly, hotly alive as flame.

i want to explore your sweet hand

trail lightly over your knuckles and down to the very tips of your fingers,
travel the lines in your palm like crooked country roads.

i want to put my face in the warm secret of your neck
run my hands over every juncture of your body

the in-and-out of your waist’s curvature,
the cord of tendon in the crook of your knee.

i want to kiss the innermost part of your thigh
the tender skin taut over the pelvic bone

press my lips there
and murmur with my eyes shut that

oh god, i love you.

Let Me KnowI can’t tell if this is love or inspiration
or the songbird’s melody fresh in my ears,
woven into my heart.
My heart is like a woven basket:
each treasure stowed carefully;
but no basket is fool-proof.
That’s why this feeling can’t be identified-
my basket is bursting at the seams,
and it’s getting a little too heavy to carry.
I need someone to share these treasures with,
Yet I fear this is
fleeting
flying
fugitive.
So help me.
Let me know if this is love or inspiration
or the songbird at my window.
Let me know this is love
and ground me
because I am a helium balloon
with a big fat smile ac

2.05from ashes you rose,
and to ashes you will return,
skin ripped from muscle
and muscle from bone

i will watch you burn
and laugh as your fingernails,
still red with my blood
melt into your skin

yes, i will burn with you
but at least this fire knows
no other woman's touch
and at least death
tells no lies

My lost taleI watch
I fall
I fell
I watched
I won
I lost
I cut
I scarred
I laughed
I cried
He’s the reason why
He hurt me
He cheated
He lied
He cut
He scarred
She cussed
She fought
She yell

relicsi shouldn't need reminders that you exist
but
littered chocolate wrappers
the dull warmth of library seats
stray threads from your skirt
incomprehensible scraps of study notes
your name on the notice board
and effusive laughs from other rooms
make me quite warm inside

NevrozaÎnchide-mi ochii și fă-mă să cred că ești adevărat
Întunericul nu încuie lacăte pentru totdeauna
Lacul de unghii nu vopsește și inimi
Ce e cald rămâne roșu
Albastrul e pentru marțieni
Și pentru diminețile reci.
Nici zațul nu poate să-mi mai vadă viitorul
E crunt, e-amar
E un coșmar în cămașă de noapte la semafor
Așteaptă să se facă verde.
Dacă nu poți trăi fără iubire
Te voi ajuta să ți-o imaginezi.

LoveAs darkness from the deep abyss

As a sweet angel's kiss

A dream, a fear, so far, so near

A desire, a need, so dim, so clear

One's daydream, one's love

One's hand, one's glove

A journey of a lifetime, capable of incredible feats

A fight eternal, to find the missing puzzle piece

LoveLove

The defintion of love isn't:
an intense feeling of deep affection
the defintion is us
It's the tears you weeped
before I wiped them away
It's a promise we keep
and the feeling I have

you see me the way I am
I see you for you
to the world you're one person
but to me you're the world

The defintion of love
Is us

HeartHeart

My heart throbs as you draw close

Blood roars through my body

I feel butterflies flutter inside

My breathing picks up

I feel slight panic

I never know what to do

You smile

I smile back

You close your eyes

Lean toward me

My butterflies tickle more rapidly

I lean down to meet you

Our lips meet

I wrap my arms around you

And sink into bliss

You want me?I want your loving embrace
It took me a lot to know this is the case
I don't want my love to go to waste
And be left alone with a bitter taste
I feel your passionate words surround me
Slowly but surely they fill me with glee
I want to do the same for you
It's something I have to wait to do
Be careful, my father can be mean
And I can't date till I'm 16
You sit the and patiently wait
You desperately want to be my mate
Sometimes love seems too scary
You act like I'm the one you'll marry
If I concetrate, your almost there
Is it bad I want to hide that I care?
If so I apologize
I find it hard to be wise
I love you
Yes I do
One of the only things i

falling in love on SkypeI first met you on Skype,
our conversation kept going from day to night.
Our hearts beat like a drum,
as we came together as one,
we confessed our love to each other,
as we fell in deep love for the first time.
Speechless from meeting each other,
we blushed as red as a cherries,
wishing that we were side by side.

But month later,
seeing each other one last tine,
you turned off your Skype,
and stepped out to the war.
my tears kept flowing a thousand time,
my heart shattered like broken glass,
as the rain poured, it cover my pain.

My once cherry cheeks are now stained with tears,
will they ever go away?
as everyday is a miserable day,
i al

Perfect MemoriesI gave you my
broken dreams,
and you turned
them into distant
memories.

Today. You Make Your Move. Today. You Make Your Move.

Today you'll change something,
Something you've never done before,
You soon get nervous,
You're too nervous,
You're too nervous to ask the girl who you deeply have a crush on,
You say to yourself. "I can't to this, I can't,I'm sweating"
Then you heard a voice,
A voice you've never heard before,
It say's to you "You can do it, I have faith in you!"
You go up to the girl, fully confident,
You say "Hey,I don't want to creep you out but,
I like you, I love you, I know, I know you're probably thinking,
I was too nervous to ask you this..But,
Will you go out with me,on a date?"
You look at the girl, you see her cute s

HelpYour voice is like poetry to my ears, your soft lips wipe away all my tears
I need your help now...
Come chase away all my fears
I'm so lost now...

The reasonsThe reasons

I think you know I like you now
how I blush, When you hug me
You layed your head on my shoulder
"It feels like you just got done running"
you said as I watched your head move up and down
The reason I blush, and nervous
do you know that I like you now

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Affectioni ignored it
laid outside and talked about
those moments
lying to his face, poor boy
right and perfect imitation
held myself at my sides
and feigned my own mutilation
found this perfect situation
dont know how to
fuck it up
but thats talking-yet
letting in my influence
would crawl into me
swirl in circles
keeping any soul
i had at bay
its all blue eyes
and those stuttered glances
i wont hold you
flit away
so perhaps
im searching desperately
for some patched net to catch me
as i fall from this
into oblivion id theorized into itself
reading books
and i dont understand the titles
staring into the sunset
arent i syrupy

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Devil's Inside Yourself Beside

by ~poorlywritten, Jul 5, 2005, 3:01:44 PM
Literature / Poetry / Romantic / Teen / Free Verse

possessed
that feeling
like flame up the spine
words are crawling
out your ears
not lying anymore
thats an unobserved sin
only seeking punishment
when sitting under the
third and fourth stair
it only works
when im staring
to something i dont
find
when i say
you are there
but its a being
crawling into my eyes
obstructed vision
in the least
im viewing petty touch
with fascination
when am i cured
what eyes do i find
in the landscape
of nothingness
desert air suffocating
through open windows
i found my name again
but lost its meaning
the voice whispering
doesnt care
my world was an
experiment
to reaction
love a notion
evil in the sparks behind
waving sparklers
those messages
i found myself
looking on the ground
thrown so softly aside
but ill crawl back
in fluid motions
not a solid anymore
melted by a self prescribed
hades of the mind
in the looks
that i still cant find
move
a track is telling me
calculated chorus
youre not their rock
when things die
you laugh

Devil's Inside Yourself Besideby ~poorlywritten

Literature / Poetry / Romantic / Teen / Free Verse

I had bruises up my arms, little fingerprints, for days afterwards. Chasing each other around a room and chanting insults we didn't even understand. My second love. I a wasp and he a...joined stool. Back in the day. I miss that green dress. And this has nothing to do with that almost story at all. Funny.

~PlainGreySky Jul 10, 2005 Writer

I would marry you...

~PlainGreySky Jul 11, 2005 Writer

and one random dutchman that makes us flapjacks for supper...

~poorlywritten Jul 10, 2005

We could live in Canado with 6 adopted children! From....Venezuela!

~AmusantVerteYeux Jul 6, 2005

WOW

this piece was AMAZING
the words you use are so inspirational your poems make me want to draw
i love this one

~poorlywritten Jul 7, 2005

Thank you.
Being an artistic inspiration...that is awesome.

~AmusantVerteYeux Jul 7, 2005

Your welcome

and yea, your poetry makes me want to just start drawing what images i think of with your poems

~crackedmem0ries Jul 5, 2005

"i found myself
looking on the ground
thrown so softly aside
but ill crawl back
in fluid motions
not a solid anymore
melted by a self prescribed
hades of the mind"

..... wonderful

~poorlywritten Jul 5, 2005

I really liked that bit too.
I know I like something I've written when I feel detached from it, like I don't own it. That line felt like something I'd copy onto my door frame in sharpie marker. Which is always a cool feeling.

~crackedmem0ries Jul 6, 2005

o0o0o0oo!!!! i think you just gave me THE greatest idea!!!!
when i get my apt (soon!!!) im going to get a biiiiiiiiig piece of butcher paper and have everybody that comes in write on it. and i can put things that i like on it too.

yay! i like that idea!!!!!!!!!!!!

~poorlywritten Jul 6, 2005

That would be freaking awesome.

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