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its raining as i write as i listen to
a song and my life is consumed by
perfection whilst i ignore its
faults and the moment weighs
upon my eyes and overtaken i
begin i want to cry but its
my nature to soak up the outer
layer of every small and lonely pain
just as im not tired
I COULD STAY HERE
BECOME SOMEONE DIFFERENT
BECOME SOMEONE BETTER
i want nothing more than to drown
what i am in my love
for the drops of rain down and
through our drain pipes
because i cant remember the last
moment i felt whole all
encompassing grip of night
and cool air doesnt feel as cold
KEEP ME ALIVE
the sound is dwindling
THE MUSIC
this song imagined every
moment passing through
the day because im prone to
the obsession settling in fingertips
the rain is falling but i do not
pray and i cant step outside my
legs frozen to the air
hitting the ground, soft sound
through the window i breathe in
i could never be as beautiful.
The caps sentences throughout are Cat Power lyrics I wa slistenign to at each isolated moment.
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PlainGreySky Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2005   Writer
very unique i love it....you are a sculpter of words m'lady...
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Fraido Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2005
one of my favs
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poorlywritten Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2005
Thank you muchly.
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AmusantVerteYeux Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2005
brilliant! :wow: its definately a fav! wonderful piece!
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poorlywritten Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2005
Thank you thank you thank you.
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