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younger
behind a wall
and staring to the sky
searching in
the blue of
a believed heaven
i am forgiven
if i pray
screaming for
vindication
sought in the most
simple way
ill beg the figure
hiding behind white
clouds
in night
and running through
the stars
that this life
and everything
indebted
belong to
two hands
one mouth
a being
now alone
i never lost faith
just wondered where
itd always been
when crying for
deliverance
wondering where
the music went
nobody had answered
but ill never question it
non existence
of false comfort
the skies sleep alone
tonight
because this night
is just like every other night
ill curse my pillow
say a name in vain
and wait for tomorrow
never wanting something
better
the little girl
inside the shed
is nothing
but a walking book of lies
my eyes are staring
but they no longer hold
deceit
i rely on the living
to steal my breath
just like lily did
"my belief
is lost
as i look to
an absent god
wishing for you
theres something
there
it clicked for a moment
i whispered
'right now you are real'
i love foolishly"

-Earlier
:iconamusantverteyeux:
i loved the flow of this piece and i love the line - "searching in the blue of a believed heaven i am foregiven if i pray screaming for vindicatioin sought in the most simple way" :)
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:iconpoorlywritten:
Thanks. Sometimes I'm afraid that my stuff is too choppy, so that's nice to hear.
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